Friday, September 15, 2017

Sympathizing With Jake Barnes

I like writing about characters that I find to be interesting, and Jake Barnes from Ernest Hemingway’s The Sun Also Rises is one of them.  Jake is quite a contrast from the narrators who guided us through Virginia Woolf’s Mrs. Dalloway and Nicholson Baker’s The Mezzanine.  The differences in his character are made more pronounced by Hemingway’s writing style, which also differs greatly from that which was used in the other books.  Hemingway’s short and terse, but meaningful style of writing (following the Iceberg Theory) helped me sort of wear Jake’s shoes while not leaving me completely at the mercy of the narrator’s train of thought. 

From what we’ve read so far, Jake immediately comes off as sort of a macho man (This seems like sort of a parallel to Hemingway himself, who was described as being very masculine - holding an interest in fishing, hunting, being a womanizer, etc.) who holds men with less manly traits in a considerably lower regard.  For example, in the beginning of the book he describes his friend Robert Cohn to us, the readers, and he certainly doesn’t mince words.  His tone is sort of biting and carries a certain mocking undertone.  I’d even go so far as to describe it as venomous in a way, which is certainly not the way people typically describe their friends. 

Staying true to the Iceberg Theory, not much is directly revealed about Jake’s character, or even Jake’s past even as the story goes on.  Jake leaves many of the details out of the story he tells.  However, many inferences can be made from the minute (and sometimes trivial-sounding at first glance) pieces that are included in the story in order to fill in the missing details.  Probably the most important of these is the injury Jake suffered to his genitalia during the war, since although the damage is undetectable in plain sight, it affects him deeply even after the war, and is a major obstacle standing in the way of a happy relationship with Brett.

Jake’s injury gives him more depth as far as I am concerned – it sort of turns him from a jerk who can’t seem to find any flaws in himself with an unsettling hate for select other people into a much more complex character with a reason (how justified the way he treats other people is could be debated) for acting the way he does.  He, feeling as though he lost his masculinity, feels frustrated with others who have what he doesn’t but are ‘wasting their potential’ such as, in his mind, Cohn.  This frustration is exacerbated by the fact that it is a deal-breaker for Brett, and even though they love each other, they feel the need to stay apart. 


Once we are exposed to more and more of these small details, a broader and more vivid picture begins to form.  After seeing his weaker and more vulnerable side, I feel much more inclined to sympathize with him.  Also, given that his bitter side stays below the surface and doesn’t really present itself when he interacts with his friends, I feel more comfortable feeling this way.  Do you agree?

5 comments:

  1. I definitely agree that you can sympathize with Jake. You make a good point about how he comes off as a macho man (and also anti-Semitic, misogynistic, and homophobic), although his injury gives further depth to that persona. I think it's also important to keep in mind that Jake's values to a good extent are society's values of this time. The scene which draws me to sympathize with Jake the most is the scene when he's alone in his room, crying. Hemingway writes this scene so frankly, and his struggles become relatable. In this scene we see more of Jake's deeper thoughts and emotions, and that makes him more human to me. However, Jake is also extraordinary in that he was wounded in World War I, which in itself makes me inclined to root for him. For example, since this injury hinders his romantic life, it makes me want Jake to have romantic success. By looking beyond Jake's "macho man" side, you've done a great job in analyzing a character that I believe incites sympathy.

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  2. You sum it up pretty nicely, Nishant. Hemingway's style of writing makes it a bit harder to see the full picture and roundedness of each character, but overtime it pays off as we can slowly but fully process what kind of characters we are dealing with. Jake can be controversial in some of his ideas, but I have a soft spot for the guy. The fact that he lost a pretty significant part of his masculinity helps me sympathize and understand him more, and (especially when he cried to himself in bed) I inevitably found myself feeling for him. I fins it interesting how Hemingway slowly pulls the reader in sync with Jake's feelings, even if they had a bad impression of him in the beginning.

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  3. I agree with you that Jake is a fascinating character. I can’t quite decide whether I like him or not. I definitely agree that after learning about his injury, his cynical tone seems much more justified. I also like the point you brought up at the very end of your post – that his bitter side stays beneath the surface. We as readers are very harsh on Jake because we see his worst and innermost thoughts. When he insults Cohn (in the beginning of the novel) and sexualizes Brett and gets angry at the gay men, we see his thoughts, but in all of those instances, he never lets it show to others. I would be willing to bet if you met Jake on the street, you wouldn’t think of him as particularly mean - whatever mean thoughts he has he doesn’t show. I think Jake should be cut a little slack by readers, just because we are seeing him so intimately.

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  4. I love your point that the author can "wear Jake’s shoes while not leaving me completely at the mercy of the narrator’s train of thought," which I often felt with Baker and Woolf. Those authors tended to dictate your view of each character, making it hard to stray from the opinion they wanted you to have. With Hemingway, we can ask questions like "do you sympathize with Jake?" and get a broad variety of answers. As to my opinion, I find it hard to sympathize with an anti-Semitic, racist, homophobic, sexist, especially because I can't see where he's getting these prejudices from. I think it's fine to be bitter about Brett and the men who go after her, but don't use their race/sexuality/religion as an excuse for that hatred.

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  5. I also found Jake very interesting! I believe that his vehement attitude towards Cohn reflects his deeper insecurities. They share many similarities: they are both writers, they both play tennis, they both love Brett... Jake's "tough-guy" persona seems to be very motivated by his emotional and self esteem issues.

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